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I have returned to finishing the Manual update, after a long hiatus while I was searching for inspiration...

When the KDE upgrade got started, I realized we had all but nothing in the Manual on the CR. I have tried to adapt what is in the Wiki (and is now somewhat outdated), with the result attached. Is this correct as written?

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Looks correct; there is also the section about the cr over at mepis community org you might look over. Looks good. :popcorn: Jerry

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Jerry3904 wrote:
Is this correct as written?


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Jerry,

One suggestion: In the last paragraph change the word "who" to "what". So it will read what the packages are instead of who the packages are.

otherwise I can even understand it. :happy:

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KrispyKritter wrote:
One suggestion: In the last paragraph change the word "who" to "what". So it will read what the packages are instead of who the packages are.


Reread it. He's referring to packagERS, not packages.

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If you want to fix the microscopic details:
In the explanation of Main, m in most is a capital letter.
Only two of the explanations ends with a period.
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there is also the section about the cr over at mepis community org you might look over.
Thanks--I wrote that so know it well. It is also linked at the end of that section.
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If you want to fix the microscopic details:
In the explanation of Main, m in most is a capital letter.
Only two of the explanations end with a period.
Good eye!

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