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New CR section in Manual -- please review
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MEPIS Enthusiast   Joined: Wed Jul 19, 2006 6:13 am Posts: 6441 Location: Geneva NY Has thanked: 1379 times Have thanks: 1031 times 
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Post # 288102
 New CR section in Manual -- please reviewI have returned to finishing the Manual update, after a long hiatus while I was searching for inspiration...
When the KDE upgrade got started, I realized we had all but nothing in the Manual on the CR. I have tried to adapt what is in the Wiki (and is now somewhat outdated), with the result attached. Is this correct as written? TIA You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post. _________________ A Wiki only works when many eyes are on it. 32bit, 2.6.36-1-mepis-pae, KDE 4.6.5, AMD Phenom 9650 Quad-Core, Dell SP2309W with integrated webcam, Nvidia GeForce 6150SE, 4 GB DDR2 |
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| Wed Nov 09, 2011 10:40 pm |
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MEPIS Guide   Joined: Wed Jul 12, 2006 4:30 pm Posts: 1243 Location: Flinthills of Kansas, USA Has thanked: 183 times Have thanks: 112 times
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Post # 288105
Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review Looks correct; there is also the section about the cr over at mepis community org you might look over. Looks good.
 Jerry_________________ http://patentabsurdity.com/ Toshiba Tecra M-6 Laptop 1.6Ghz core duo, 1.5g ram, 12M wlan "beware a frequent flirt with potential disaster" |
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Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review
suits me _________________ Asus M4A87TD USB3 AMD 870 Socket AM3 Athlon II X4 630 2.8GHz Quad Core GeForce 9500 GT 1GB PCIe, nVidia TwinView Kingston 2G x 2 1333 DDR3 WD Caviar 500GB x 2 SATA hdd |
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MEPIS is cool!   Joined: Fri Dec 29, 2006 8:09 pm Posts: 597 Location: Dallas, Texas Has thanked: 39 times Have thanks: 57 times
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Post # 288109
Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review Jerry,
One suggestion: In the last paragraph change the word "who" to "what". So it will read what the packages are instead of who the packages are. otherwise I can even understand it.  Steve _________________ I messed with the dragon and now I am ready for the ketchup! The only stupid question is the one you already know the answer. ~Krispy Kritter~ Toshiba Satellite A215-S7427(AMD-64) Windows7/M11(KDE4.6.5)/M11(RoadblockTRK2-32) via Grub2 |
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| Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:55 pm |
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Post # 288110
Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review
Reread it. He's referring to packagERS, not packages. _________________ Asus M4A87TD USB3 AMD 870 Socket AM3 Athlon II X4 630 2.8GHz Quad Core GeForce 9500 GT 1GB PCIe, nVidia TwinView Kingston 2G x 2 1333 DDR3 WD Caviar 500GB x 2 SATA hdd |
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 MEPIS Guide  Joined: Sun Apr 29, 2007 11:53 am Posts: 2183 Location: Stockholm, Sweden Has thanked: 589 times Have thanks: 510 times
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Post # 288125
Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review If you want to fix the microscopic details:
In the explanation of Main, m in most is a capital letter. Only two of the explanations ends with a period. Henry |
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| Thu Nov 10, 2011 4:45 am |
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MEPIS Enthusiast Joined: Wed Jul 19, 2006 6:13 am Posts: 6441 Location: Geneva NY Has thanked: 1379 times Have thanks: 1031 times
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Post # 288130
Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review
_________________ A Wiki only works when many eyes are on it. 32bit, 2.6.36-1-mepis-pae, KDE 4.6.5, AMD Phenom 9650 Quad-Core, Dell SP2309W with integrated webcam, Nvidia GeForce 6150SE, 4 GB DDR2 |
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