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New CR section in Manual -- please review

#1 Postby Jerry3904 » Wed Nov 09, 2011 10:40 pm

I have returned to finishing the Manual update, after a long hiatus while I was searching for inspiration...

When the KDE upgrade got started, I realized we had all but nothing in the Manual on the CR. I have tried to adapt what is in the Wiki (and is now somewhat outdated), with the result attached. Is this correct as written?

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Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review

#2 Postby JBoman » Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:41 pm

Looks correct; there is also the section about the cr over at mepis community org you might look over. Looks good. :popcorn: Jerry
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Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review

#3 Postby uncle mark » Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:48 pm

Jerry3904 wrote:Is this correct as written?


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Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review

#4 Postby KrispyKritter » Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:55 pm

Jerry,

One suggestion: In the last paragraph change the word "who" to "what". So it will read what the packages are instead of who the packages are.

otherwise I can even understand it. :happy:

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Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review

#5 Postby uncle mark » Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:00 am

KrispyKritter wrote:One suggestion: In the last paragraph change the word "who" to "what". So it will read what the packages are instead of who the packages are.


Reread it. He's referring to packagERS, not packages.
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Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review

#6 Postby Utopia » Thu Nov 10, 2011 4:45 am

If you want to fix the microscopic details:
In the explanation of Main, m in most is a capital letter.
Only two of the explanations ends with a period.
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Re: New CR section in Manual -- please review

#7 Postby Jerry3904 » Thu Nov 10, 2011 8:54 am

there is also the section about the cr over at mepis community org you might look over.
Thanks--I wrote that so know it well. It is also linked at the end of that section.
If you want to fix the microscopic details:
In the explanation of Main, m in most is a capital letter.
Only two of the explanations end with a period.
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